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remove the “you want”
Why?
I think the second “you want” could stay. still grammatically correct, and makes the barber sound like he is from NY or something.
Yeah, that’s what I was going for. Stylized speech.
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January 13th, 2009 at 5:52 pm
remove the “you want”
January 13th, 2009 at 6:30 pm
Why?
January 14th, 2009 at 9:03 am
I think the second “you want” could stay. still grammatically correct, and makes the barber sound like he is from NY or something.
January 14th, 2009 at 9:37 am
Yeah, that’s what I was going for. Stylized speech.